Saturday 4 October 2008

Conundrum

Wild laughter and
Melancholy sighs
Soft words and
Blank stares
Niggling doubts and
Hearty reassurance

Love, revisited.
Life, undone.



28 September 2008

20 comments:

  1. de closin lines say so much...sigh! cant have enuff f such writes, i feel!

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  2. Ironical lines but then the writing style was not ironical of ur usual self....spot on...

    Short but Sweeeeettttt!!!!!

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  3. Sash... great to have you in here and almost immediately:) Thanks :)

    Rajesh: Ah! Thanks for the grace in the note:) Just a ramble..:)

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  4. Great work! It just speaks for itself. Two contrasting thoughts put together makes such a wonderful combination, a heady concoction.

    Cheers
    Tara :)

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  5. Tara, that was delightful for me to read too, your discerning perspective:) Thank you!

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  6. Thank you so much for such a sweet comment! What I felt when I read it is unputdownable (Aah..I so love that word now :) in words. Thank you so much!

    Take Care and keep writing more such lovely pieces. Eagerly waiting...

    Tara :)

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  7. Hi Usha,

    Guess what, all (the little) of it went above my head. I guess my IQ levels have dropped after being in Dubyaland for 9 months now. :-(

    Pen a few lines for fools like me too, who understands only four or five line rhymes :-)

    Cheers,
    Salil

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  8. Salil. Lol. Still you stayed on and left that note:) Thanks:) And I guess the write too is a Conundrum, of sorts, to me too... :) Just a silly ramble, that kinda is pretending to be profound, :)

    Yeah sure, the next mushy gooey one comes along, I'll alert you:) Maybe you want to try the write called "The Right Age", on the Evergreens list:) Now that is really musing of a foolish one.. :)
    Thanks again!

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  9. short, simple, thought provoking!

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  10. Praveen, thank you:) I rather enjoyed reading about the heat transfer lesson on one of your blogs.. the SCTEngg coll.. :) Entertaining:)

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  11. hehhe..thts not written by me..its by a junior guy in my college..quite funny:D

    my personal blog is http://crusadertvm.blogspot.com/

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  12. I love this...the contrast of it all, and the closing lines are the tops...thank you for such a lovely read...

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  13. Praveen, wl sure drop by there, too... :) Thank you for letting me know:)

    Vrinda, thank you; it's a delight to hear from you too!

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  14. Good one ! short and sweet and puzzling and that's the theme here I guess.

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  15. Trinath, right you are about the puzzling part...:) Thanks for the read the very "you" note:)

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  16. short...but bang on...never before hav i seen two words in each line convey so much...too good

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  17. Sandeep, you're doing the rounds as I see!! Honoured all the more! Thanks for all those wonderful words of appreciation too!

    Not a poet at all... as my profile says, just a rambler.. who goes on, lol!

    And do tell me, which of the many blogs I saw on ur profile is yours:)

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  18. u deserve them....and yaa..out of the many u saw there...yeM Bee yAe is my blog...MBA in mallu style..he he..hard core mallu u see..cudnt help it while naming my blog too...it contains short stories(fiction) and humourous snippets from the life of a MBA graduate

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  19. Sandeep, lol.. i figured that out :) Clever innovation; and if another mallu cannot recognize it, she's not worth being called one, lol.
    Thanks a bunch for being here today!

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