Tuesday, 6 July 2010

Raindrop - Haiku :)

A big pearly drop!

Plop! It falls deep into my thoughts

Rippling into words!

6 July, 2010
(Online :) :) )
Syllable count :)

A /big /pear/ly /drop - 5

Plop! /It/ falls /deep/ in/to /my /thoughts - 7

Ripp/ling in/to /words! - 5

The picture is taken from here:
Copyrighted to its owner.

More Haiku, here :)

and here too :)


  1. Like a ripple turns into a wave,
    about your Haiku I can only rave
    How do you make the words behave
    as if they are your own slave?

    Simply Superb Usha.

  2. Govind, I have your comment in my inbox :) Thanks so much. I did publish it, but blogger seems to have swallowed it whole, and refuses to let me re-publish!
    Thanks so much. Will copy paste it here, in case blogger still refuses, a bit later.

  3. Lovely. This haiku category is made special by you, everytime you pen one. Plop! I like that. Adds so much of a visualizing effect.

  4. Lovely as ever! Such an apt pic too!! :)

  5. Govind, there it is finally... Thank you :)

    Soumya :) :) Relieved that blogger is behaving itself, and letting me share your words too! Thanks!

    Sash... :) Yours too! Thank you so very much :) :)

  6. Oh this is lovely, especially the 'plop it falls into my thoughts'! I almost heard that!!! :D

  7. hey! Where did my comment go?? :O

  8. Shail... I was taking a walk up a little hillside in a mild drizzle; walking with my mother up to a temple there :) And plop a big raindrop fell of a leaf into a puddle on the way :D

    Couldn't not capture that :) :)

    Thank you!

  9. Aayushi :) Thanks to you too :)


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