In that look we shared;
And mesmerized, we made
That Deal.
And yes, we were, and have been
And still are, all that we could be...
But to each other?
That look, we look, yet again, for it
Hoping against hope...
For when we scripted,
While we enacted...
We overlooked the line
Between lines...
*Conditions Apply
Online, 1 pm, 20 June, 2010
for a moment I thought you were writing for your anniversary !!! then suddenly I felt you are writing for some scheme in which you have been tricked... !!! lol... what was it about... its not nonsense... atleast it intrigues... !!! :)
ReplyDeleteI like this:
ReplyDelete"We overlooked the line
Between lines..."
Hitchy... LOL! or rather that comment is making me ROFL :D!!
ReplyDeleteThanks... for reading that absurdity, and trying to make sense of it :D Let's just say it's a slice of senselessness, that desperately wanted out, from my clutch :D!
Thanks again!
Aayushi, thank you :)
ReplyDelete:)
ReplyDeleteThere wasn't a slightest hint
ReplyDeleteand we can't lodge a complaint
for we haven't read the fine print
no siree we didn't.
There isn't a single deal or a relationship which is unconditional.
Sash... :) to you too :) Thanks!
ReplyDeleteGovind, perfect understanding, as usual :) Thank you so much!
But to each other?
ReplyDeleteThat look, we look, yet again, for it
Hoping against hope...
Such a clever construction. LOVE the way you have kept it so direct yet with so less space. I like Govind's comment. It fits the poetry perfectly.
Another sweet little gem of truth.
Soumya... :) :) Thank you Kind Sir :) Loved your note too!
ReplyDeleteGood one Usha!!!
ReplyDeleteAgree with Govind's comment above!!
Stumped once again Usha, by your words......
ReplyDeleteFor when we scripted,
While we enacted...
We overlooked the line
Between lines...
So beautifully said...As for me Usha, as the years go by..I cannot see the lines, I could read between.....good one indeed Usha.