Got you there!
You say, when you call!
And I....
I can hear
the sound of the
gentle twinkle in your eye-
When you tease me so...
I can see the smile
slipping down from
your eyes- and
leaving your lips in
the light laughter!
Mmmm... and I can
literally taste
the warmth of your look-
The slow fire burning,
Lit by the love that
holds us together!
Each moment of
Our togetherness,
Is such a
Certain, Predictable,
Pleasant, Loving Surprise!
16 December, '07
Valentine's Day is tomorrow :) Come unleash love, to make the world a better place, a non violent place and a place where we can reclaim the choice to live, not just exist :) :)
Solilo:) Thanks for the prompt :) Am keeping the faith.. 6th post.. :)
A bit more mush here "Winsome Wiles" :) :)
You say, when you call!
And I....
I can hear
the sound of the
gentle twinkle in your eye-
When you tease me so...
I can see the smile
slipping down from
your eyes- and
leaving your lips in
the light laughter!
Mmmm... and I can
literally taste
the warmth of your look-
The slow fire burning,
Lit by the love that
holds us together!
Each moment of
Our togetherness,
Is such a
Certain, Predictable,
Pleasant, Loving Surprise!
16 December, '07
Valentine's Day is tomorrow :) Come unleash love, to make the world a better place, a non violent place and a place where we can reclaim the choice to live, not just exist :) :)
Solilo:) Thanks for the prompt :) Am keeping the faith.. 6th post.. :)
A bit more mush here "Winsome Wiles" :) :)
Usha, Thanks again. I have saved some of your poems. I love these lines..
ReplyDelete"Each moment of
Our togetherness,
Is such a
Certain, Predictable,
Pleasant, Loving Surprise!"
So true for my other half and me.
ummm u make me wanna get married :D if only i can share such moments.. :)
ReplyDeleteSolilo, :) That is good to hear too.. :) Advance wishes for the Big Day :) Crossing my fingers that the protests all over are successful. thanks for the lovely words too!
ReplyDeleteMeena :) :) Good :) Marriage is a good thing actually. So thanks for the vote, :)
''Mmmm... and I can
ReplyDeleteliterally taste
the warmth of your look-
The slow fire burning,
Lit by the love that
holds us together''
Passion...and loads of it..:)
''Valentine's Day is tomorrow :) Come unleash love, to make the world a better place, a non violent place and a place where we can reclaim the choice to live, not just exist :) :)''
yes,beautifully said..reclaim the choice to live...and not just exist...
hoping and praying...
hmmmm its soothing reading this....
ReplyDeletelets unleash the love ... yea....
Wow! Awesome synesthesia! Perhaps we can await other figures of speech too :D
ReplyDeleteIndyeah, Meg, lol... getting a bit hot under the collar eh? :D :D! Nopes, Just getting across some much needed love into the air :) Thanks for the awesome comments as well.. :)
ReplyDeleteDhiren, lol, yes.. :) Thaanks.. :)
Roopa, now now.. there are no new figures of speech.. though I am trying to figure out how to make a speech for love, for tomorrow, for Overdrive.. :)Thanks for the warm warm words too :)
I have finally done your tag on "holding hands" :). Check it out when you get time :D
ReplyDelete"Certain, Predictable, Pleasant, Loving Surprise!" ... makes me feel there's certain 'nevergonnahappen' part2 somewhere!
ReplyDeleteThings that make life beautiful :)
ReplyDeletejust the way the poem depicts
Beauty !
Oh just came to say that the previous comment as zoominhing was me :P
ReplyDeleteRoopa, read it :) Awed! Just that! :)Thank you so very much!
ReplyDeleteSanket, lol, no second part unfortunately :)Thanks for the visit and the read :)
Shalu, ok :) Thanks for both those comments, and for the sweetness of those words, as always!
Predictability is such a comfort sometimes....
ReplyDeletevery beautifully expressed Usha
... And you did it again... :) :)
ReplyDeleteExquisite flow! Loved it...
Peace.
I can see the smile
ReplyDeleteslipping down from
your eyes- and
leaving your lips in
the light laughter!
these lines actually slipped inside like the laughter from one's eyes. so beautiful.. feels like drowning myself in these words
Mithe, thank you.. as always, for getting to the writes with sweet words!
ReplyDeleteKarthik.. :) :) Many thanks!
Meenakshi [If I may :)], thank you so very very much!