Endless yet tunnelled
Into a claustrophobic
Vortex of existence;
Am I?
Or better yet...
Will I ever be?
The cranium floods
With nerve ends tingling
Arcs over synapses
Tingling
Tingling...
Terrifying me.
Life, I must admit
Shall be
My undoing.
Online, on a silly line of thought :)
13 September, 2009
Now where do you get such poetry from in your cranium???
ReplyDeleteThe cranium floods
With nerve ends tingling
Arcs over synapses
Tingling
Tingling..
WOW! That was a revelation...:)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading the hidden depth of the verses and what your heart spoke today!!!
Keep writing, coz' you are amazing at what you do...:)
IHM, lol :D! Beats me too :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the note :)
Fiducia , thank you too. I must admit that i have nothing to do with what I write... a mere conduit, that is all I am :) Thank you again!
Am speech.... less!
ReplyDeleteMaybe I tend to repeat myself, but I can never come close to match the things leave in my mind to the words I write as comments!
Keep posting!
Prabhu, thank you for giving speech to those thoughts too :)
ReplyDeleteAnything I say would be considered redundant!
ReplyDeleteGlad to see you post after a long time :-)
:D :D
ReplyDeleteLovely... !
We'd always love your cranium flooding
ReplyDeletewith thoughts that are so very dazzling
and arcs over synapses forming lightning
It is you that should be threatening.
Usha just beautiful. We only wish we get more of this.
Very interesting!
ReplyDeleteesp the last lines... they make me phrase the phrase, "Patriotically in Love!" ... stupid, i know...
anyway... keep inking!
That was brilliant.one of your best.Mystic and surreal.i just loved it
ReplyDeletetake care
"Maut ne hamko bakhsha hai lekin ,
ReplyDeleteZindagee ke Sataye huye hain"
"While the death has pardoned me,
It is the Life that has tortured"
Life is just a phase you're going through...you'll get over it ;)
ReplyDeleteLife, I must admit
ReplyDeleteShall be
My undoing.
I stopped here.. Felt an inexplicable surge deep in.
Amazing write.
Luckily I found your blog, next to mine... Template similarity surprised me slightly and then the verse "shook" me.
missed this Ushus...missing you more...terribly infact...come back please...as and when you can....
ReplyDeletewho else will write words like these?
((((((((((((((hugs))))))))))))))
a wealth of meaning and a lifetime of experince in these lines Ushus...
love you dear dear Ushus:)
Ah.. life!
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