Monday, 30 March 2009

Knife







The knife twists in the wound
As I sit and watch

The pen scratches on paper
And I still feel inexperienced.



Undated

16 comments:

  1. The twisting knife can make only superficial wounds. A scratching pen can still cut so deep. The pen, as they say is mightier than the knife

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  2. still and painful.....yet so beautiful

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  3. Naperville mom, :) You said it :) Actually! Thanks for being here :)

    PRG, that is yet another quote that comes from you and finds an angle to shine a torch on this one! Thanks!

    Meenakshi, thank you so much.. for seeing the double edge to it :)

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  4. I am amazed by these four lines. Just glaring at the screen of my lappy..

    nothing to say..just superb.

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  5. Wow! Very powerful thoughts! A knife and a pen used to send the message across..excellent!!

    Keep Blogging!

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  6. Gets it clear cut to the reader,painful


    now that's terrific writing

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  8. I was waiting for a poem which would kick me hard out of laziness and this does it. Just in time I should say!

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    loved this one:) had been waiting so desperately to comment:D


    let me echo Pankaj and simply say superb!!!

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  10. As an old adage goes - the pen is mightier... ... ... (Just looked up to see that it has already been quoted!)

    The hand that wields a pen can make wounds look "artistically brutal" as opposed to a knife's macabre. Poetic Justice is served with a pen. Not a knife.

    Loved your lines. Profound as ever. :)

    Peace.

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  11. how did i miss this one! shades of grey.. a darkness in the write.. intrigues!

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  12. nice one..
    each wound has to be a fresh wound if we try to heal it and each word is a new word when we try to write it..

    wishes..

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  13. LOVED this!! would be an understatement! :)

    good comparison between pen and knife! which is more powerful...! i'd vote for the pen!

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  14. Pankaj Upadhyay , thank you so very much!

    Biju Mathews , thank you too!

    Shal , thanks so much... :)

    future mantra , thank you :) Hope you do get the readers :)

    Trinath, lol. Got you shaken did it? :-o! Thanks for the hard hitting note as well! :)

    Indygurl, yayyy! To see you here too. :)thanks!


    Karthik, Poetic justic you say :) Now that is really giving this write an honour! Thank you!

    Meena, dont worry. Am glad you did get here though :) Thanks!

    Sashu :)thank you!

    MIp, thanks so much!

    Vinay, thank you :)

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