sometimes
there are so
many me s
that I
don't know
me any
more
with each new
person
bond
feeling
a different
part becomes -
and takes
over
and I keep
wondering
when
that one day
someday
will dawn
when I can
stand up and
live
for
just
ME
6 June, 1987
Hee...heee...nice one...there are so many US taking different positions at diff stages of life...mostly depends on situations... its tough to define that ME...coz we change with time...
ReplyDeleteif u have to define that ME...it gotta be that instant wen u made ur entry into the planet.. Am I right?
Thank you, Rajesh, for that delight of a comment:)
ReplyDeleteAs to when that ME would be ME.. am still clueless, but then that moment of birth seems the most uncomplicated time of life, certainly!!! Thanks for provoking more food for thought!
I pick up a new idea everytime I wander over here. I'm definitely going to try new-lines over commas to separate thoughts. Great poem, and thanks for the spark.
ReplyDeleteAareet, thank you!
ReplyDeleteGlad that you find yourself able to associate and connect with the rambles here; gladder that it provokes ideas for you as well! Honoured in fact!
Thanks for the visit to my review Usha. I hope you end up liking the movie
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments Usha. I hope you like the movie
ReplyDeleteThanks to u too, Amit, for dropping by here.. hmmm.. hope to catch the movie sometime:)
ReplyDelete:)
ReplyDeletejust the desire to see the ME is enough, it will lead us safely , as quickly as possible to the ME :)
isnt it :)
Shal, thank you:) You truly have the idea, and the path, to get there:)
ReplyDeletethat one day someday will dawn....wow...poets have such amazing capability of linking two seemingly abstract things...dis one was brilliant usha...kudos!
ReplyDeleteSandeep... made may day, entirely.. and more, today!
ReplyDeleteThanks, a zillion!