Sunday 21 September 2008

me

sometimes
there are so
many me s
that I
don't know
me any
more

with each new
person
bond
feeling
a different
part becomes -
and takes
over

and I keep
wondering
when
that one day
someday
will dawn
when I can
stand up and
live

for
just


ME





6 June, 1987

11 comments:

  1. Hee...heee...nice one...there are so many US taking different positions at diff stages of life...mostly depends on situations... its tough to define that ME...coz we change with time...

    if u have to define that ME...it gotta be that instant wen u made ur entry into the planet.. Am I right?

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  2. Thank you, Rajesh, for that delight of a comment:)

    As to when that ME would be ME.. am still clueless, but then that moment of birth seems the most uncomplicated time of life, certainly!!! Thanks for provoking more food for thought!

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  3. I pick up a new idea everytime I wander over here. I'm definitely going to try new-lines over commas to separate thoughts. Great poem, and thanks for the spark.

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  4. Aareet, thank you!
    Glad that you find yourself able to associate and connect with the rambles here; gladder that it provokes ideas for you as well! Honoured in fact!

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  5. Thanks for the visit to my review Usha. I hope you end up liking the movie

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  6. Thanks for your comments Usha. I hope you like the movie

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  7. Thanks to u too, Amit, for dropping by here.. hmmm.. hope to catch the movie sometime:)

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  8. :)

    just the desire to see the ME is enough, it will lead us safely , as quickly as possible to the ME :)

    isnt it :)

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  9. Shal, thank you:) You truly have the idea, and the path, to get there:)

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  10. that one day someday will dawn....wow...poets have such amazing capability of linking two seemingly abstract things...dis one was brilliant usha...kudos!

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  11. Sandeep... made may day, entirely.. and more, today!

    Thanks, a zillion!

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