In Redemption
Expulsion, into exposure.
Naked stand notions.
Thoughts thrashing
Through screaming silence.
Your copious consolation;
Or casual concern?
In emotion electrified,
Yet redeeming regret;
I find favour finally-
Deeded to Death.
7 August, '07
very well written...personally i loved the first 2 lines...keep writing..
ReplyDeleteI think its been a while since u dropped in n read my blogs :)
Song of a ripped open heart :)
ReplyDeleteSmall sharp :)
Rajesh, thanks... those actually are my fav lines too:)
ReplyDeleteShal... thank you:) You get to the nitty gritty so easily!