The open doorway beckons
My heart, it recognizes and surrenders!
Why did it call, so?
And why did my heart answer?
Fleetingly, I wonder, yet again-
I knew, didn't I? All along...
I knew we'd touch that emotion-
Indescribable, but, oh so tangible-
Together, the same instant
At that open doorway, between our hearts
Merging and mingling
Suffused with the warmth
Awash with the tingling tenderness-
That only the silent succor of love gifts.
Goosebumps!
A precious moment.
Existence ended then.
And life began...
6 August, 2008
almost a de javu feelin wi diz one!! n knowin you, itz no surprise!! loved it..trulyyyyy! :)
ReplyDeleteGoosebumps!
ReplyDeletehere too ma'am..
Beautifully put across..
I knew we'd touch that emotion-
Indescribable, but, oh so tangible-
Together, the same instant
At that open doorway, between our hearts
Merging and mingling
Suffused with the warmth
Awash with the tingling tenderness-
That only the silent succor of love gifts.
Loved these lines to the core ma'am..!!
Thirst quenching write..Fabulous!!
Smooth and suspenseful, as descriptive and alluring as ever.
ReplyDeleteP.s. I also like the "one-post-a-page" idea, it focuses the attention of the reader.
Long time no read :D
it took some time for me ..
ReplyDeleteread it again..
"Indescribable, but, oh so tangible"
yes.
Beautiful
MIP
for a change, i have postd something different..
Sash... i know:) thank you too!
ReplyDeleteBharath, thank you for connecting with this one!
Aareet, thanks:) its a pleasure to hear from you too!
MIP, thanks; have been catching up with the multifaceted artist that you are:)
complete contrast to "will you listen"...ha ha...loving every moment..every emotion...every post...its like a roller coaster..he he..
ReplyDeleteAnd I certainly am enjoying every comment you have posted in here this day!!!
ReplyDeleteIndebted, for your time, and your words, shared here:) Thank you!!
and now I reach here after itching to write when I first saw this and not having the time..:)
ReplyDelete''A precious moment.
Existence ended then.
And life began...''
how do you write these?how?
As winnie says,makes one yearn for all of it....
Meg :) :) Replete, for now :)
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