Wednesday 6 August 2008

The Moment

The open doorway beckons
My heart, it recognizes and surrenders!

Why did it call, so?
And why did my heart answer?


Fleetingly, I wonder, yet again-
I knew, didn't I? All along...

I knew we'd touch that emotion-
Indescribable, but, oh so tangible-
Together, the same instant
At that open doorway, between our hearts

Merging and mingling
Suffused with the warmth
Awash with the tingling tenderness-
That only the silent succor of love gifts.

Goosebumps!

A precious moment.
Existence ended then.
And life began...




6 August, 2008

9 comments:

  1. almost a de javu feelin wi diz one!! n knowin you, itz no surprise!! loved it..trulyyyyy! :)

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  2. Goosebumps!
    here too ma'am..

    Beautifully put across..


    I knew we'd touch that emotion-
    Indescribable, but, oh so tangible-
    Together, the same instant
    At that open doorway, between our hearts

    Merging and mingling
    Suffused with the warmth
    Awash with the tingling tenderness-
    That only the silent succor of love gifts.


    Loved these lines to the core ma'am..!!
    Thirst quenching write..Fabulous!!

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  3. Smooth and suspenseful, as descriptive and alluring as ever.

    P.s. I also like the "one-post-a-page" idea, it focuses the attention of the reader.

    Long time no read :D

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  4. it took some time for me ..
    read it again..
    "Indescribable, but, oh so tangible"
    yes.
    Beautiful
    MIP
    for a change, i have postd something different..

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  5. Sash... i know:) thank you too!

    Bharath, thank you for connecting with this one!

    Aareet, thanks:) its a pleasure to hear from you too!

    MIP, thanks; have been catching up with the multifaceted artist that you are:)

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  6. complete contrast to "will you listen"...ha ha...loving every moment..every emotion...every post...its like a roller coaster..he he..

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  7. And I certainly am enjoying every comment you have posted in here this day!!!

    Indebted, for your time, and your words, shared here:) Thank you!!

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  8. and now I reach here after itching to write when I first saw this and not having the time..:)

    ''A precious moment.
    Existence ended then.
    And life began...''

    how do you write these?how?
    As winnie says,makes one yearn for all of it....

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