Showing posts with label Senryu. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Senryu. Show all posts

Tuesday, 28 October 2008

Tantalizing Tanka!!

Tanka, like Haiku, is again a form of Japanese Lyric Poetry.

[As you know by now, :) ] A Haiku works with 17 syllables arranged in 3 lines of 5/7/5 syllables to each line, and evokes an aspect of nature and the seasons, with the last line holding the punch so to speak.


A few haiku here, in my previous post!

Tanka on the other hand gives the writer more space to work with – 31 syllables, arranged in 5 lines of 5/7/5/7/7 syllables each. Tanka is an older form of the lyric in Japanese… dating to 13 centuries ago, while Haiku is just about 3 centuries ago..

Tanka was mainly written between lovers, as society had accepted the fact that a man’s dallying with another woman, other than his wife was normal!! After the man departed early in the morning, he would send a Tanka to his lady love with his message of love..




I hope you enjoy these Tanka, and that you will try some of your own!






Morning After...






A fiery blush

warming your palm under my

face, on the pillow-

the morning after the night

before – in our crimson dawn.

20 April, 07

(Picture from : www.betweenthesheets.co.uk)


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Death Smiles

[Tanka in Tandem]






The beautiful rose

Tall, vain, proud- but now slain, lies

Picture-perfect on

The coffin of her mistress,

Whose hand fed that vanity!





Death waits and smiles in

Irony – the beautiful rose

Tall and proud, now his

Prize: another soul to take

Away – unexpected Gift!


30 April, ‘07

(Pictures from : scholez18.blogspot.com ; www.guardian.co.uk)
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A Note on the Lover's Bedside
[Tanka in Tandem]




Love, I leave you now-

your hair spread over pillows

soft ; your body in

wanton pleasure, covered by

satin sheets white: Oh! pure grace!




So that my heart – yet

again whetted by your thoughts;

my breath savouring

your promises, beckoning

delights; returning to you!


10 May, ‘07
(Picture from: www.dallas-sleep.com)

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Me in You!





What's it about you


I love most, you ask and wait;

O Love, don't you know?

Not passion- not body sweet!

But me, in you, held captive!


16 September, 07

(Picture from : http://www.chiselstudio.com.au)


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Breeze of Love




Thoughts of you blow a

Gentle breeze, running fingers

through my hair, your way!

Whispering, a feather touch

Vow; our love of yester eve!


16 September, 07

(Picture from : www.prlog.org)



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Friday, 24 October 2008

A Shower of Haiku !!



Rebirth




autumn leaves falling:
buried seeds look up hoarding
hope to grow anew.

6 April, 07

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Story of Life






Dew drops winking just

momentarily, to fade:

Story of life, lived.


12 April, 07

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Paradise





in crystal water -

under the blue sky: a lush

green - paradise mine.




20 April, '07

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Lightning!



cosmic energy:

pent up fury, just unleashed –

a bolt from the blue!


15 May, 2007

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Rain





Softly falling drops-

touches my soul - harmony!

in a shower to cleanse!



10 May, '07


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Onam - Haiku in Tandem






A celebration
Flowers, hues, spirit of nature
Festival Divine!!!



Richness of colour
Promise of Prosperity
Onam: life relished!!



30 August, ‘07

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Sorry, this one is another re-post:) The original is Here. As you will see, there isn't any change as such, but a re-arrangement, which I just managed to be taught, by my young philo' Soumya. Thanks, Soumya... :) Time for you to assess my progress, lol!

Haiku is Japanese lyric poetry, composed, usually, in 3 lines of 5-7-5 syllables each, on some aspect of nature and the seasons. A very amateur attempt here:) More on Haiku and how to write it, HERE.

The picture for the Haiku "Rain" is a gift from a dear poet, Shalini Devraj. The pictures with "Story of Life" and "Paradise" have been taken by my brother and son, on which I've attempted the writing with the help of Photoshop:) The final picture of the Pookkalam [the flower carpet, and this is with real, natural flowers :)] was taken this year, at our home, on Onam Day:), 12 September, 2008. The picture with "Rebirth" has been taken from a webpage on the net:)


Another write, associated to this, is an earlier post, a Senryu, called The Chill. Senryu works like a Haiku, but then again, it is slightly darker in nature:)


Monday, 29 September 2008

The Chill - A Senryu

The Chill


The liquid tear drop

Solidifies into pain-

Barren snowy heart!


28 September, 2008

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Syllable Count:

The/ li/quid /tear/ drop...5

So/li/di/fies /in/to/ pain-..7

Ba/rren/ sno/wy/ heart!..5

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Senryu is a form of Japanese lyric just like the haiku. The one above is in the 5-7-5 format:) However, while Haiku celebrate the seasons, and nature, Senryu speak of human nature, and are mostly a little darker in their expression: More, from wikipedia..

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Senryū (川柳, literally 'river willow') is a Japanese form of short poetry similar to haiku in construction: three lines with 17 or fewer "on" (not syllables) in total. However, senryū tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryū are often cynical or darkly humorous while haiku are more serious. Unlike haiku, senryū do not include a kireji (cutting word), and do not generally include a kigo, or season word.
The link, for those interested:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Senryu

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