Saturday 5 July 2008

A Fallacy?

Rarely, ever, does what we write,
Stay so, in its sharing!
Words articulated
From Inner Voices
From Outer experiences
From Aural, Visual and Oral fragments
Laced with emotions,
Garnished with imagery;
Served to tickle a
Cerebral and Emotional palate
(Hoping that palsy of the Cerebrum
Shall not ensue thus!)
Always find themselves
At the Mercy of the Consumer!

For, was there ever, a Chef
Or even the best home-made cook
Who did not thrive,
When taste buds blossomed
Into tangible responses?
Who was ever insecure
Till that response was approval?

And so, it is,
With all who create:
And, I sometimes wonder,
The Master Craftsman Above?




5 July, 2008

4 comments:

  1. Who was ever insecure
    Till that response was approval?

    Very very true, consummates the theme so well! :)

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  2. Very true.the amazing characteristic of creativity is, the truer you become it gets more and more insecure unless you are reassured.

    Another awesome realization with the last few lines that highlights the grip of the theme as well is,If He is one of us ,he waits for our approvals too.what do we do then ? It starts a new poetry just from the last line.

    Brilliant!

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  3. Rarely, ever, does what we write,
    Stay so, in its sharing!


    so very true!!

    Who was ever insecure
    Till that response was approval?

    And so, it is,
    With all who create:
    And, I sometimes wonder,
    The Master Craftsman Above?


    *gasps*

    de beauty f diz one lies here..in tamin de ever so natural and raisin it to extraordinary!! :)

    excellence sparkles!!

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  4. Rukhiya, :)thank you!

    Soumya, you always outline so well, most of what even I did not see:) Thank you!

    Sash.. :)thanks so very much!

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